snowodin
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Post by snowodin on May 5, 2010 23:32:27 GMT -5
Well... I'm currently working on my fanfiction's Chapter Three.
I thought that, well, because in the first two, I tried to build up some tension, I'd have some comic relief in it. so here's a sneak preview, I suppose, if you all don't mind.
"Why did you bring me here?" Twigpaw asked the other tom. "Because of two very important reasons, Twigpaw." The tom replied, and Twigpaw waited anxiously. "The first reason I will tell you is the less important one. It pales in comparison to the second reason." Twigpaw nodded. "First off, I came to warn you. There is a false prophecy going about, and some cats believe it. You know the prophecy, but you don't know the cats. Find them, and convince them otherwise, or else they, as well as many others, will have a tragic fate." He paused, lifted his paw, and licked it a couple times, as if to groom himself. Twigpaw turned his head, and couldn't help but wonder. What possibly could beat that by a moon in importance? "Second," He continued, drawing the paw over his ear to wash it, "I was lonely, and I wanted some company." Twigpaw nearly fell over from shock.
...... :3 .... and yeah... I'm working on that right now.
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Post by moonmomma on May 5, 2010 23:35:55 GMT -5
ooh! I think you're going to have some readers here ;D
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snowodin
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Post by snowodin on May 5, 2010 23:36:30 GMT -5
Thanks! I appreciate the praise! I really do!
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Post by wildbreeze on May 6, 2010 16:23:23 GMT -5
I liked these lines from chapter 2: "Soon, they passed by the willow tree. Twigpaw couldn't help but let out an amused purr as he remembered Berrystorm's comment on what the Willow tree was for. "Willow tree leaves. Great for lying under to get some shade and sleep."" Made me smile...
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Post by plasticat on May 6, 2010 20:20:19 GMT -5
Ha! Oh, I love it already!
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Post by moonmomma on May 7, 2010 12:09:44 GMT -5
I liked these lines from chapter 2: "Soon, they passed by the willow tree. Twigpaw couldn't help but let out an amused purr as he remembered Berrystorm's comment on what the Willow tree was for. "Willow tree leaves. Great for lying under to get some shade and sleep."" Made me smile... What greater purpose could a tree have in life?
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