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Dream
Feb 7, 2011 21:21:48 GMT -5
Post by plasticat on Feb 7, 2011 21:21:48 GMT -5
This is from "what I wrote for NaNoWriMo," which changed names a million times (previously known as "The Unknown" and "Side Effects"). I finally settled on a name- Alienation. Anyway, this is one of the paragraphs from it. It hasn't been edited yet, but I like it just the same. It is a dream that the main character has several times:
He walked slowly down the long corridor. At the other end was a huge gate. Standing in front of the gate were two strange, winged creatures that never moved. Voices were calling his name; they were coming from everywhere. He kept walking. He was getting closer. Just a few more yards, and he’d be there. One of the strange creatures moved. It reached out and grabbed him, holding him back while it looked into his eyes. It was sending some sort of message into his mind. Now he heard a new voice, one that was much clearer. This new voice was in his mind, and it was telling him to hurry.
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Dream
Feb 8, 2011 0:03:13 GMT -5
Post by moonmomma on Feb 8, 2011 0:03:13 GMT -5
i'd like to read this
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